this is our work for this week i liked it but the writing tasks were short and boreing.
Thursday, 25 November 2021
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This is our writeing for this week the topic is when you woke up with a superpower what would you do?
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Its pretty plain I know but this was kinda confusing for me I don't do planing very often because I always have everything sorted out ...
Hey Emily !
ReplyDeleteI like how you showed your working out for the maths on the 11th slide. Next time maybe you could use a differnt background?
Nice work Emily, I like the mash-up house you made on Minecraft and that you explained a bit about it.
ReplyDeleteI also like how you answered a lot of the maths questions and that you showed your maths thinking for them.
I thought the new form of transportation you made was quite creative. I have never thought about making a huge skateboard for people to travel on. I also like how you used a fuel source that would not normally be used for vehicles.
I am not sure how your billboard background completely relates to your transportation. Blue is a good colour for a billboard, but it seems strange you have chosen the night sky...don't you think this might blend in too much with the sky once it becomes night time?
I am also wondering where your jingle sound track is? I noticed you have the lyrics, but you don't have the music to go along with it.
Please make sure you add a question at the end for the reader as well as some more labels so this can be a quality blog post.