Thursday, 2 December 2021

work for the week

 


This is our work for the week i enjoyed the create taskes because they were all so easy. i had more i ideas for the games but i was still fun.

1 comment:

  1. Nice work Emily.
    On slide 5, I think it would have been easier to read your answers if it was not underlined like the question. Maybe next time you could skip a line so it is easier to tell the difference between the question and your answer.

    It is great that you answer a lot of questions for the maths tasks, however it would have been great if you used the line tool on slide 16 to create straight and even lines rather than scribbles. This is the same for slide 17, your second circle is not cut into fifths so it is not complete. Again, the same for slide 18. I also think for next time you could answer less chilli 1 and 2 questions and focus on chilli 3 and 4 as I know you are capable.

    I enjoyed reading the poems you wrote this week, particularly the acrostic poems. You used some great words and sentences that are related to your chosen games.

    Next time please add more labels to your blog post. This week you could have included the labels: writng, reading, maths, game, LCS, 2021...

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Amazing work for the week

  This work is one off the the best I have done yet. The writing was actually  quite hard to understand but once I had it, it was easy.