Friday, 5 November 2021

lockdown work

 


This is our work for this week it is based of art and i enjoyed it.
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  1. Whaea Tamzin5 November 2021 at 16:16

    Kia ora Emily, I like how you gave your opinion about graffiti and included some possible solutions to the issues the students had written about in their letters. I like how you selected a lot of different maths questions to do, however next time I think you should try more of the chilli 3 and 4 questions as I know you are capable to give them a go.
    I like the idea you had for the art STEAM project, I can image a mural of a marae could be quite beautiful. Next time, I suggest you add an explanation next to your picture. Your explanation could include: how it relates to the Papakura area and where it would be placed.

    Your writing piece this week was creative. I found that even though it was not very long, it caught my attention. When you are editing your writing make sure you check and make sure you have included speech marks (" ") when a character is speaking.

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