Friday, 24 September 2021

Writing

 


This is our writeing for this week the topic is when you woke up with a superpower what would you do?
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  1. Whaea Tamzin25 September 2021 at 09:40

    Kia ora Emily,

    I really enjoyed your writing this week. I thought it was interesting that your character tried to keep having a normal life even though they had powers. The cliff hanger at the end was also great! I wonder who is coming to meet your character?

    Next time make sure you read over your work to double check spelling errors. You could even ask a family member or myself to help you edit. Also make sure whenever you are talking about time to include either am/pm after the number.

    Here are some of your spelling errors:
    throne = thrown
    usal = usual
    narely = nearly
    sutle = subtle

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