Friday, 10 September 2021

WRITING

 


This is our writing task for this week it is in first person and even has some from my sister.
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  1. Whaea Tamzin10 September 2021 at 16:27

    Hi Emily,

    I really enjoyed your writing this week and like that you took inspiration from MHA. I also thought it was great that your sister wrote a bit as well.

    I think next time you could add a few more labels to this post such as: writing and online learning.

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Amazing work for the week

  This work is one off the the best I have done yet. The writing was actually  quite hard to understand but once I had it, it was easy.