Friday, 17 September 2021

Writing

 


This is my writing for this week the topic is the label and the title my three points are Animals, Gardens and About other countries hope you enjoy.
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  1. Whaea Tamzin17 September 2021 at 18:14

    Kia ora Emily,

    You have some great ideas in your writing. I like how you covered different areas such as how jobs can be impacted if everyone is vegetarian. However, this weeks writing task asked you to write a narrative (made up story) and it looks like you have written a report. Next time please make sure you read the instructions carefully so you know what is required.

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