This work is one off the the best I have done yet. The writing was actually quite hard to understand but once I had it, it was easy.
Thursday, 9 December 2021
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This is our writeing for this week the topic is when you woke up with a superpower what would you do?
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Its pretty plain I know but this was kinda confusing for me I don't do planing very often because I always have everything sorted out ...
Hello Emily This is really good and I like Hoot and your drawings but what do you mean by all in my head like what ideas did you have but overall it is a really good drawings
ReplyDeleteKia ora Emily, nice work this week. I think you could have included a lot more labels for this blog post and you forgot to add a question for the reader.
ReplyDeleteOn slide 7 with the table of unknown words, you could have deleted the empty rows and then made the font larger in the completed rows.
I really enjoyed reading your poem from this week, I can tell you thought about what sentences to include about your chosen character.
Your cartoon drawings look fantastic! Maybe you could have deleted the creates you did not finish this week from the slideshow.