Thursday, 12 August 2021

Sport or Music

 


This is what I think about sport and music it might not be your opinion but its mine.
What do you think about sport and music??? 
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  1. Whaea Tamzin24 August 2021 at 11:27

    Hi Emily. I like how you showed both pros and con with music and sport. I also like how you visually show which side of the line you stand on with these two topics. Next time remember to include you N.L and R.T for your writing. It is also important to include an opening statement that introduces your topic when you are wanting to persuade the reader.

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