Thursday, 26 August 2021

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  1. Whaea Tamzin27 August 2021 at 11:07

    Hi Emily.
    I like how you did some research about this topic and also asked you mum for advice. I think you made a great point about other cultures feeling left our in the school environment if we only focus on kapa haka. Next time remember how we want to set our a persuasive piece of writing. This includes an introduction of the topic, 2-3 paragraphs explaining your points and a conclusions. We also want to make sure we include the N.L and R.T for this task. You can find this on the writing slide.

    Remember to make quality blog posts. This includes a statement about your learning, a question at the end for the reader and labels. Some labels you could have used are: writing, online learning, kapa haka, point of view and persuasive.

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