Great work Emily. I like how you made your word search long and rectangular rather than an regular square. You also showed lots of different ways to add the dots together in the maths problem. Next time aim to describe each colour memory with a couple of sentences to make the reader visualise your memory.
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Great work Emily. I like how you made your word search long and rectangular rather than an regular square. You also showed lots of different ways to add the dots together in the maths problem.
ReplyDeleteNext time aim to describe each colour memory with a couple of sentences to make the reader visualise your memory.