Wednesday, 16 December 2020

kick start

 

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  1. Daniel from the SLJ Team16 December 2020 at 11:44

    Hey Emily,

    I’m Daniel from the SLJ Blog commenting team. I’m looking forward to seeing all your amazing blog posts and I hope you’re enjoying your summer too.

    Good effort on this comic task. I think you’ve got the tone of the two fishermen’s relationship down as they bicker with each other like old friends. It’s clear to see you’ve thought about the characters facial expressions and come up with dialogue to match.

    See you later in the comments.
    Daniel

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