Tuesday, 12 May 2020

natural disasters

2 comments:

  1. You achieved so much excellent learning and creating here! I love the tornado in a bottle, we need to do that at school! Your writing is very emotive and uses good describing words to achieve this. The picture is a great background to add to the mood of your writing. Excellent!

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  2. danka witch means thankyou

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Amazing work for the week

  This work is one off the the best I have done yet. The writing was actually  quite hard to understand but once I had it, it was easy.